Target Audience: Lip sync improvements.

I have asked some of my peers from my target audience to comment on the lip syncing video of Stephen to tell me if there is any part of lip synching scenes I can improve before I film more footage with my supporting actors and actresses:

Results:

Research Conclusion:

I need to edit out the background noise, which will be amended once I add in the Too Many Friends track when I begin to put my footage together. The target audience also seemed to prefer the close up of Stephen rather than the  mid-shots, so I will use more of the close ups in my music video.